


But how can a story have good character development and have 2 characters realistically fall in love in 58 pages? It.

I failed to notice that when I downloaded, so that’s on me. Once again, here’s a story where I can’t help but feel like if the hero had been fat and ugly instead of a sexy billionaire, this would’ve been an episode of Criminal Minds instead of a steamy romance.īut sadly, double standards and a complete lack of plot weren’t all that I found wrong with this story: Here, let me sum it up for you and save you some time: rich, scarred, billionaire recluse hires hot young maid because he wants her, instalove and sex ensue after he creepily skulks around the house watching her, stalker style.
